How is my shading? I simply use the burn/doge tool in gimp but plan on going to cell very soon. Aside from that, how is the placing? (base used)


This piece is one of my best as far is lines... I am well aware my lines are uneven, bumpy and rather thick, but I like the "cartoon" style lines, trying to get it to were I'm not over doing it.


My anatomy is improving I see, but I have a ways to go as I often get frustrated and just find a base.

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If you will (I'm sure you can lol) point out anything wrong or something that needs improving other than what I've stated please do, but don't be a bitch about it.
( as in cursing or saying crap, shit, horrible, ETC )


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On another note, I can't even get anything done with a base, so just outfit designs today.

Rules

1. I'll make a feature choosing my favourite oc of yours.

2. If you comment, please do the same in your journal, putting the tagger on in the first slot. The idea of this is not to get a free feature, it is to spread art around for everyone!

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1. - Den, far right, bottom row, . Nice design, love the hair and eye color combo, as well as the personality he gives off.

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